Pecking Order

4 Responses to Pecking Order

1. Terry Wassall says:

   16 May 2020 at 12:25 pm

   Great poem Bill. I like the whole premise of the poem but I especially love “propels the heart through the cannon-muzzle of emotion” and the final rhyming couplet.

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2. Bill Fitzsimons says:

   16 May 2020 at 2:54 pm

   Thank you, Terry – glad you like it.

   Cheers,
   Bill

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3. Myrna Moore says:

   17 May 2020 at 1:08 pm

   Great poem Bill. Love how the figures of speech become metaphors and how the tools of poetry are personified.

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   • Bill Fitzsimons says:

     18 May 2020 at 10:36 pm

     Thank you, Myrna for your gracious comment.

     best wishes ,
     Bill

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